Post by bladus on Aug 17, 2010 12:05:25 GMT -6
This is supposed to be a short story, not just one chapter though ;D ;D.
Chapter 1: Unexpected
The man had been walking though the streets for hours, people looking at him, comtemplamting at his strange clothes, his spiked boots, the three necklaces on his neck the one in the center had a green gem, his strange coat and undershirt, his yellow eye, his eye pacth, and the scar on his face, every one that looked at him stopped when they saw the scar on his face.
The man looked around when he noticed that everyone was trying to run from him, though they were speed-walking he could tell what they were doing This always happends.... he though.
He continued walking till he was out of town, he walked towards the river, the sound of the water running calmed his mind, it helped him relax his muscles, to rest his black soul, he sitted in the ground, and then allowed his back to fall to the ground, looking at the sky now orange thanks to the magnificent sunset.
It has been centurys since then, i wonder.....if i am the only one alive, or the only one...
A scream was emited and heared, he raised his back from the ground using his hands for pushing, he looked around and finded the source of the noise. Two womans at the other side of the river, one looked normal, with short black hair, though the other didnt looked normal.....but rather she looked familiar for the man.
Long red hair....same features... the same eyes.....what the hell.....wings?.
The man stood up completely as he looked at the sword the red haired woman with white skin went though the other woman throat, she removed it slowly, the sword wasnt covered in blood as it will obviusly will, instead the black haired woman fell to the ground, her body becoming black ashes as her body fell to the ground."A demon". The man whispered for himself, there had been years since he saw a demon and a angel fighting
"One lest, five more to go". The other woman said as she holstered her sword, and spreaded her arms, her wings spreading with them."It can`t be, she was...". The man said, he remembered how his brother trusted his sword on her chess, she puking blood from his mouth, being holded in Sombra`s arms, his arms.
The woman smiled, and then she looked around, she sensed another presense, Sombra was that presense, he hided behind a stone, trying to get a closer look to the woman, she was dreesing completely in white, i common look in angels, though she was wearing clothes more closer to this year, using a white shirt and white jeans.
The woman detected the presense behind the stone, Sombra gritted his teethIf she is Alexa i cant allow she to look me like this, i am a f***ing demon.... and she now seems to have reincairnated, i got to do something.........i know
Sombra clapped and his body became black ashes, those ashes became a little compacted orb, and the orb flyed from the rocks to the sky, it was so tiny that Alexa couldnt notice it, she walked around the stone and looked nothing."I know i sensed something here, now where it is?".
Now hight on the sky, beyond the clouds, the orb made a little explotion, revealing Sombra coughting by the excesive amount of ashes in the sky, he crossed his arms and smiled, then he started thinkingI feel happy, something i havent experienced in years.....but this is extrange....if she is back then who did it?.
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In a dark place, probably below the ground, a ritual had been taking place, 6 ominous hooded beings were chanting in a strange language, these 6 beings were surrounding a circle, with a being with four wings on his back, short blond hair, and several scars on his chess and back was being revived."All hail to the return of the Follower Of Light".
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Concrit will always be received as long as it isnt flame, and this is the first time i try to make a cliffhanger, so it will probably be bad done D:
Chapter 1: Unexpected
The man had been walking though the streets for hours, people looking at him, comtemplamting at his strange clothes, his spiked boots, the three necklaces on his neck the one in the center had a green gem, his strange coat and undershirt, his yellow eye, his eye pacth, and the scar on his face, every one that looked at him stopped when they saw the scar on his face.
The man looked around when he noticed that everyone was trying to run from him, though they were speed-walking he could tell what they were doing This always happends.... he though.
He continued walking till he was out of town, he walked towards the river, the sound of the water running calmed his mind, it helped him relax his muscles, to rest his black soul, he sitted in the ground, and then allowed his back to fall to the ground, looking at the sky now orange thanks to the magnificent sunset.
It has been centurys since then, i wonder.....if i am the only one alive, or the only one...
A scream was emited and heared, he raised his back from the ground using his hands for pushing, he looked around and finded the source of the noise. Two womans at the other side of the river, one looked normal, with short black hair, though the other didnt looked normal.....but rather she looked familiar for the man.
Long red hair....same features... the same eyes.....what the hell.....wings?.
The man stood up completely as he looked at the sword the red haired woman with white skin went though the other woman throat, she removed it slowly, the sword wasnt covered in blood as it will obviusly will, instead the black haired woman fell to the ground, her body becoming black ashes as her body fell to the ground."A demon". The man whispered for himself, there had been years since he saw a demon and a angel fighting
"One lest, five more to go". The other woman said as she holstered her sword, and spreaded her arms, her wings spreading with them."It can`t be, she was...". The man said, he remembered how his brother trusted his sword on her chess, she puking blood from his mouth, being holded in Sombra`s arms, his arms.
The woman smiled, and then she looked around, she sensed another presense, Sombra was that presense, he hided behind a stone, trying to get a closer look to the woman, she was dreesing completely in white, i common look in angels, though she was wearing clothes more closer to this year, using a white shirt and white jeans.
The woman detected the presense behind the stone, Sombra gritted his teethIf she is Alexa i cant allow she to look me like this, i am a f***ing demon.... and she now seems to have reincairnated, i got to do something.........i know
Sombra clapped and his body became black ashes, those ashes became a little compacted orb, and the orb flyed from the rocks to the sky, it was so tiny that Alexa couldnt notice it, she walked around the stone and looked nothing."I know i sensed something here, now where it is?".
Now hight on the sky, beyond the clouds, the orb made a little explotion, revealing Sombra coughting by the excesive amount of ashes in the sky, he crossed his arms and smiled, then he started thinkingI feel happy, something i havent experienced in years.....but this is extrange....if she is back then who did it?.
________________________________________________
In a dark place, probably below the ground, a ritual had been taking place, 6 ominous hooded beings were chanting in a strange language, these 6 beings were surrounding a circle, with a being with four wings on his back, short blond hair, and several scars on his chess and back was being revived."All hail to the return of the Follower Of Light".
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Concrit will always be received as long as it isnt flame, and this is the first time i try to make a cliffhanger, so it will probably be bad done D: